All Comments on 'A Hole in Him'

Nicely done! I liked these references to the Hulk series, really witty :)

You are one of the few who writes romances in this category, I always look for your stories for that exact reason! Thank you again for another nice story!

Very good erotic nice seduction luv it.

I loved this story!

Great storytelling eraj! Can’t wait to read what your oh-so creative mind comes up with next.

Nice story. I don’t usually read gay male stories but I do love bi guys. My biggest turn on is watching 2 guys playing with each other. Ever since my brother played with his best friend. Now if I had been Ellie, I would have sat and the bed and say “Can I watch?”.

Loved the story, so well written! Will look forward to reading more of your stories!

Oh eraj, you've done it once again, and beautifully done it at that. I had no idea this would end this happily after that "I have a girlfriend" remark. But you tied up everything nicely. Selfish little Ellie ending up as she deserved. Finley not only grew stronger but also found himself. And Royal got his friend back along with the forgiveness he needed and also a lover. So yeah, I'd say you tied this up very nicely. And like Marasso, I also liked the Hulk references, they added a touch of whimsy at just the right times. Thank you for yet another ***** plus story. MLF

the buildup from losing a possible friend to gradually regaining this classmate's trust and friendship and seeing it grow to a point where it blossoms over time from limited one-way sex to full gay mutual sex and love is masterfully handled.

This was really good. It almost read like a whole novel synopsis rather than a short story, which is very much a complement. Hulk happy!

I usually do not have the patience for a story of more than one...possibly two pages. But the promise of a 'romantic' one got to me. Glad that it did - I read it all, and enjoyed it all. You had me hanging on every word! I was never a bully in my youth, but for other reasons have had a great big 'hole' in my heart ever since then...this gives me hope that one day I may yet find my very own 'hole filler'! Thanks. '5' Favorite Story. Followed. Corjix

Good story!

It was a great story. I didn’t like the asshole behavior at the start but loved how there feelings developed into a true love for each other. Would actually love a second chapter to see how their story continues from here.

Such a sweet story! So hot!!

It was good, I cum.

I think it is a great story, it had it's moments when Royal was a jerk. I was hoping that Finley would 'cum' around and do the same to Royal, not be a total bottom. In the end they share each other's bodies, too bad Ellie didn't stick around and join them.

@Anon

Thank you - all anonymous readers for your opinions!

I appreciate each and every one of your comments, I read them all, enjoy them and cherish them! But it's hard to respond without messing up the names :( Please, leave some nicknames under your comments, that's way I will be able to respond, as I do for "MLF" :)

@Corjix

I wish you would find one "hole filler" some day!

And I appreciate that you read my story even if longer than your usual limit! It means a lot to me, that I managed to tempt you :) !

@MLF

It is wonderful that you keep coming back to me and my story! I appreciate it so much, as you are one of my most faithful reader! I hope you sometimes check my new stories from other categories, for example T&C as I have some there you may (hopefully) like :) They are all basically gay stories also, but with a bit more crossdressing elements! :)

@Ginafrommaine

It's nice to have also women perspective, as I was told once that I write "stories for women" because of my romance elements, and I'm an atypical man :)!

Is this a stereotype? Probably! In any case, I'm here in minority as this is essentially porn-stories-page. I'm so glad I got you interested in my writing! Please, check the Gay-only-for-you story, maybe you will like it?

@dnsontn

Well, as for Gay Male Category it's gonna be super-dark story. I will go into the darkness of human lust and angst :D The love element hidden very deeply beneath the hurt and contempt element! :) Does it sound interesting? :)

In Transgender category, I will go more deep into "being trans" aspect.

So, it's new for me also.

Reggie2

Thank you, I hope the erotic part was okay? :)

@Marasso

Thank you for appreciating the Hulk element! I imagined Royal as crude, burly young man, with not so handsome face but powerful muscle mass, a future "bear" type. I'm glad you appreciate that! :)

a beautiful romance with some great sex, loved it

Cute!

That was very well written, good job! Looking forward to more!

It's something about your writing, but yours's is the only gay erotica I've ever read. Sexy and sweet. 5 stars

The last line is so perfect, relating back to their mutual holes and to the title. You’re so gifted at story-craft.

Good story, good balance, enjoyed.

Best storie I have read.

Great work - keep it up

sounds like my past

I loved the fact that your story was written 90% from the top's point of view. And while he did bully his boy to start off, he fell in love with the person and not just the hole. It was a nice read. Thanks!

So we'll balanced!! Awesome build up and perfect culmination!!

@trappedinthecl0set

Thank you, I'm glad you noticed the connection between the main motif for the story :) The idea was - that Royal's heart had a hole and the other one was well… in the beautiful ass of Finley :) It was supposed to be a bit funny and a bit serious at the same time, I was afraid if I can pull if off… :) I'm happy you appreciate it! :)

@Great Anonymous

I'm very humbled that you chose my stories as the only gay erotica you read! There can't be sweeter compliment than this!

@scargazer

In the next week there will be another story from me - I hope it will be to your liking!

@JipsyRose

I'm especially glad you liked the romance part! :)

That was a well written story. I really liked it.

Awesome story!!!! I absolutely loved it.

Hi, raj. I really like your stories. But I just feel slightly sad that you had to put a warning for ‘romance’. I don’t know the warning is for whom. But I am sure whoever feel allergic towards romance must be very sick.

#justiceforellie tbh haha

amazing

Loved it.

What a lovely story, just beautiful. When I first started reading I thought it was going to be a boring,long story. As I continued I really got into it, almost as if I were there. You described the feelings, emotions, sexual attraction, intimacy and how they grew closer as the relationship developed perfectly. Best story I've ever read on here. You're really talented, please continue writing. Joe

@Nicebiguy

Thank you so much for such a nice comment! It's the kind of comment EVERY author dreams to hear! You made my day! :)

i...i just dont know how to say, this piece is a gem, at this point, the erotic value is just a bonus, it's like i have shared the feelings of the characters.

Now, i am a book worm, so i read quite a lot (really a lot), and it is rare that I encounter such a quality of writing.

Those are published authors vetted by editors and they arent even half as good as what i just read.

So, dear stranger, from the internet, your work deserves to be in every bookstore.

I am not saying this just to be nice. I happen to be part of a panel of hobbyist reviewers who provides feedback on early copies.

As usual, nicely written. Thanks

Hulk besotted ❤

I enjoyed this story, the developing characters and their relationships. Superior to a film — the pictures were better.

Wow what a sweet story. I really enjoyed the characters and watching their feelings for each other develop. Beautifully written.

That wa great 👍🏼👍🏼

I fucking loved it. I came almost as many times as you did. Sure hope that it is a true story.

Good writing style.

Would be fun for you to run into Jonas and invite the stud back to your room for a 3-way.

I loved it! 🥰🥰🥰 You are a very good wrighter. Thank you very much, and never stop.

I really enjoyed this beautiful and hot story. It reminded me to my own life. I remember I had a very popular class-mate in the college. He liked me. When I first saw him naked in the shower after gym, I was very excited. I loved his perfect body, his bigger than average penis, and his muscular butt. And yes, I saw his virgin asshole, too. I often fantasized about us going beyond friendship and I taking his virginity. But he was notorious hetero, and friendship was more important than my sex fantasy.

Great story!

Thank you all for your nice comments, I'm happy the story gave you pleasant time!

I loved it!!!

Loved the build up and lovely ending

@Justrealisedamgay

@Erotica_Worshiper

Thank you guys, I'm grateful for your comments!

Really excellent story

Instant favorite! May be the best sex scene ("love-making", to be more specific) writing I've read on here. Goes to show that feelings can only really deepen sex; or rather, that sex with feelings is its true, highest, most intense form to which even pure beastial lust cannot compare.

@anon

"sex with feelings is its true, highest, most intense form to which even pure beastial lust cannot compare."

I absolutely agree! The best sex is always with people you have feelings for. It mysteriously adds some magic to it, some extra level even to the orgasm power :D Can't explain it, but it always worked like that for me :D

Love this story so much, keeps getting back to it.

Curious if it's the end of the story for Finley and Royal. Are you planning to write more about them? They're such a cute couple. Hell, even I'll take it with the parents' talk too if needed.

Great work on writing this!

@anon, it's a rather complete story, I don't plan on writing more chapters :) Its main motive is 'double bi-discovery'. But I'm happy you liked it!

I really like you stories, the more I read the more I feel they are on the short side. What I mean is that I would love to spend more time with the characters and the story, I guess I’m just greedy and want to spend longer with your stories.

@MRJT79 if you enjoy longer stories you may be interested that I also write books, maybe you would be interested in them.

(I write man+man romance/erotica)

Aww that was sweet.... weirdly perverted but also sweet.

And I appreciate the Bi-Boys representation.

The story, the characters, everything was amazing!!! They are the sweetest couple! The hulk comments were also super funny and cute

Beautiful! U have the talent to build a story worth reading. Luv the evolving/bi/gay aspect. Pls continue. I'll def read more o ur work. Thank u!

@Anonymous

Thank you so much for reading! And I appreciate your compliments :)

@SummerSammy

I'm glad you enjoyed it, haha, yeah the Hulk comments were fun to write ;)

@LordHimeros

Thanks! Perverted as intended! ;)

i'd like to invite you to help me clean my poor keyboard that is covered with cum as a resault of reading your seductive story....

you are nothing but the best!

@anon, I accept the invitation ;)