All Comments on 'A Holiday Haunting Ch. 03'

This was fun, erotic, and compelling. An original take on things.

My only asshole comment (and I fully recognize it is an asshole comment), is please don’t confuse me and her and she and I. Lucy could make that phrase work, but Erin never would.

Please keep writing. This was awesome.

Really loved this story through and through. The characters, the plotting, and the sex were all so incredible. My only criticism would be that the ending felt abrupt, especially when so much time was spent discussing how Erin would live in the present day. I really hope there's a chance we'll get to check in on everyone again.