All Comments on 'A Holiday Surprise'

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DanDraperDanDraperabout 2 years ago

Very short but very hot. My only complaint is that they rushed into it pretty fast.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I can understand why she wanted a revenge fuck, but he's probably a bad friend if he was willing to fuck his friends wife so fast.

FrodovFrodovabout 2 years ago

Usually I look for stories with more of a… well… a story to them and not just gratuitous sec scenes. However, this one was very well done all the same. Even if the story line was rather abrupt. Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
too short!

This is a well-written romantic story, but it is much too short. There should have been more of a build-up at the beginning. The love scene is very sweet and tender, but it too is too short. A sequel is certainly warranted, because this is nevertheless a very good story.

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