All Comments on 'A Homecoming Pt. 08'

Loving how this is going, and the detail of each scene is just spot on. More please.

Many of your sentences are unwieldy and confusing. I’ve had to read them over just to try and understand what you mean. The problem appears to be your sentence structure and lack of appropriate commas. I urge you to use an editor to clean up this problem.

Love this series but hate that nrw stories are added before this one is finished.

Never mind continuing the story...

Just book me into Ben's room! :+))))

And boom he rides off on the train 2 years ago and ....... nothing, no meeting in Munich, nothing

There needs to be a section on Literotica called "unfinished works", getting to be too many