All Comments on 'A Hospitable Gesture Ch. 03'

Does saying, "Don't make it weird" actually make it weirder?

Is it natural to talk about home repairs while both guys are obviously erect? Good Q.

Sometimes the more casual the sex is, the better it is. Especially since the object of desire is a modest, careful, insecure mother of toddlers who rarely gets to finish because of interruptions. We've all lived with this woman. Glad to read about her opening up.

but you are doling it out in drips and drabs. The first three Chapts could be one installment. Give you credit for posting consecutively though....hope this doesn t go all cucky but for now that was interesting.

Why do you not just put your whole story up? These little drips are quite annoying and not really worth reading - even though, taken as a whole, this is quite a hot story.

Nothing like being caught in the middle of something. And nothing like a buddy who will lend a hand (or tongue) when needed.

That was kind of funny the way it happened. I hope you continue the bit of humor in the forthcoming chapters. I’m surprised that those commenters who already know the outcome of this and every other story on here even bother to come back every day, since as they say it’s all been done a thousand times before. I for one look forward to more.

As has been said, why not resist the urge to spread this out so much? It loses inertia and continuity. Otherwise an entertaining piece of fiction.

After your first story I wrote you a fairly detailed comments about how much I enjoyed your story. That absolutely still stands after three chapters. I love your story and I love the genre. I am mostly writing you now because I have noticed now that everyone likes your stories have commented positively you were mostly getting negative comments. Please don’t be discouraged. Please keep writing.

If someone intentionally reads a story that is obviously about cuckolding were sharing your wife and they don’t like that type of story and their comment doesn’t mean shit.

Although I also wish you were riding more I still really love your work. I do tend to like when people have at least two full pages because otherwise I seem to just get in to the story and it ends. That’s sad I think your description is amazing. You give graphic details of what’s going on. Maybe include a little more of what’s going on in both of their minds.

Also, please ignore the comments that trying to direct you how to take your story. We do all have preferences. I think I told you in my first, I would love to see your progress with her even switching partners. But that is up to you. People are entitled to like whatever type of story they like. That said, authors are entitled to write whichever type of story they want to write.

Thank you again for your awesome stories.

Awaiting your next installment!!

First off, thanks to everyone for reading. This is my first story on here and it has been a very positive experience. I really appreciate the honest feedback; both constructive criticism and encouragement. As for the trolls, though not surprised by the comments, I am a bit surprised by the number that belong on Reddit's /r/iamverybadass or /r/nobodyasked. I started out deleting some of the overly-rude ones, but after a few, I decided to leave them in hopes that I'm not the only one who gets a laugh out of them.

In regards to chapter size and posting of the whole story, I did not realize how Literotica worked with the vetting and publishing of works. For whatever reason, only one work is published per day and it seems the rest are queued up. In hind sight, I should have made the chapters larger. I will probably finish out this story the same way for consistency sake, but in future stories I'll adjust accordingly. Thanks for the feedback on that. For those of you reading as each chapter comes out and are annoyed, maybe come back in a week once all the chapters have been published so you can read through to the end.

Finally, for those asking for changes to the direction of the story, most of it is waiting in the queue to be published and what isn't done yet is in outline form, so while you can feel free to suggest "more cucky" or "less wimpy", it's going to proceed how I already have it planned out.

Thanks again for reading!

Go on ;)

Well done.

Loved the writing, 3 stars!

I was surprised the husband would of done that, to me it seemed like a giant step.

I would of expected the inevitable next step would of been an ease of looks between the wife and friend, with maybe whispers.