All Comments on 'A Hot Summer's Night - Illustrated'

Great story, love the art work, more please.

more!

Until you revealed it was with Jamie’s blessing. Took the whole naughtiness of cheating out of it.

Love the art work though!!

Excellent artwork. Good story. More?

2 stars

DragonRider55

Excellent work.

More please

Illustrated Sequel Please, this time with Jaime, the wife walking in on them, possibly stripping naked and masturbating herself to the visuals of an incestuous relationship.

I really enjoyed the story and was hoping that Jaime was in on it and would walk in at the end. That minor disappointment aside, I still gave it 5 stars. As for the illustrations, you are (or somebody is) a pretty good artist and they added to the story, there being just about the right number.

Like Mom-Son, Bro- Sis, Dad-Daug,

So Good to read, Can imagine as the characters.

Too Good.

So well done and HOT illustrations! Am VERY pleased you added the drawings! MORE is my vote - 5+

Great story and hot fucking pictures! I loved it!!

I had read and enjoyed the second part to this story with its excellent illustrations first, which made me do the search for more of your work. Good to get the ‘back story’ and look forward to reading more. Do think that the illustrations are really well done and certainly enhance the written word.

The pics certainly made this a great story

Interesting. One little piece of feedback.. you'll want to double check anatomy. "hood of her vagina" .. clits have hoods. Vaginas have an entrance.

Instead of the guy saying no way would she let a woman have sex with him, he could have simply been shocked and grateful. The other way, while it's revealed that it's consensual makes him look like he'd rather think of himself as a cheater than lucky to have such a loving wife.

So well written and the illustrations really enhanced the story - PURE LUST!

Wow. If you want to know how the illustrations are received consider this a yes. If I'd known there was an illustrated version I would have read that one from the beginning.

It was good before but with illustrations. wow.

Nicely illustrated, though huge tits don't do much for me.

Like it, and love sis has full muffin...but...instead of knocking off another piece before wife gets back why not ask her to join?...like MMF, where guys don't have any interest in the other, just her, it could all be about him...

It would be good if the story was with two Sisters . Wife and Sister N law , you get the best of two sisters . In the next chapter a threesome with wife and sister N law .

I thought the images you worked into the story worked extremely well.

A fun story of reverse sibling seduction.

5* love the illustrations thanks.

I don't know whether you would be interested in illustrating any of my published stories. If you are 'Girl punished for crashing car Ch.2' would be a very suitable story. Please let me know via Literotica.

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