All Comments on 'A Housewife Ch. 05'

"my breasts swayed and bounced freely and kept sneaking out from the side when I walk." You have a past-present problem in your writing. Fix it it you want to tell a good story.

The bicycle scene reveals more of the same.

"'No... CY, I am...' But CY has pointed out the obvious that recently I have been leaving my curtain opened every night hoping my neighbor would watch me, specially CY who just live opposite me." And this...you're turned a hot possible story to crap.

Too many lost stars to score.

Another good story.

Some people just need to criticize, anonymously, of course.

I enjoy the way you write

You have a very erotic way of writing that continues to get me hard with every story you write.

Please write more and I love the anus play. Whenever you show off your anus I can hardly contain myself and when you have men lick your anus I'm there.

More of this please.