by enigmatic_newbie
I agree with Hugh58. I would like to read more on how the 4 worked it out and what happens the first time they are stripped in front of each other and their Mistress and Master
Please continue the story. This time write the story of Doug's journey, and I would love to see how Madison reacts to seeing her husband treated like a slave, & getting a good dose of BDSM. I am curious about her reactions to seeing him getting tied up, fucked, spanked, whipped, or anything like that. I am curious because I don't know how I will react if I were in Madison's position. It is one thing to experience a journey to being a slave/sub, but totally another thing to see my husband who I love so much getting humiliated, roughed up, and losing all control on his life. I want to see what Madison does.
Well, I guess that is three "more" to one "please no more". If I have time to write again (and to refresh my memory on this one) I will try to do that. If I remember correctly, I had planned to jump ahead in time. You may have a point though, some initial reactions might be called for.
I love this series. While i feel like the involvement of Madison's husband was a bit forced and awkward, overall, you have given a delightful insight into the emotional side of kink. Please keep up the good work.