All Comments on 'A is for Artist'

A nicely paced, highly erotic story 5*

Very well done. I imagine the whole scene in my mind. Great descriptions.

Interesting story. Some corrections

When the finger is joined be <by> the thumb and the artist begins to stimulate her teat <tit>

Short and very descriptive This a great little story that gives the reader a vivid picture of the intense erotic scene. I only hope that you can find more of these stories to share. I am definitely saving you to my favorites on my computer, hoping that there are more stories in the future.

An exquisite work of art.

A tip you might wanna look into adding more paragraphs in your writing. Now they form a wall of text and are too long. Let the reader rest a bit. For example the first paragraph should be split so the sentence beginning with "Waitresses" should be in the next paragraph.