All Comments on 'A Job to Save His Family'

Brilliant start - I do hope there will be further episodes soon. Adele.

What a complete betrayal

So far so good, I hope there is more to come, so many interesting story lines possible.

Good start.

Good job!! Please keep it going.

would love to see the story evolve further

Here for the forced, but the violation of trust from mom just made me really mad not excited. Not sure I will enjoy where this story seems like it will go.

Love it!!!

hope this is not the ending could turn into a good one so don't stop

Like the premise hope you intend to make it a deliscous slowburn ;) love and abuse question..you can play it as mom considering her son a screwup/layabout( think a looser slacker) without any romantic future becouse he is so unmanly .and this was her best option to fix there finances and get her son a "career". Basicly thinking making him a sissy is his best option and being strict about enforcing it considering it tough love.( allso play it as mom being a closeted dom.. her sex life with dad being subpar because he was a extreme career guy..) and know this comes out on her week son ;)

You've piqued my interest, please hurry with the next chapter

I would love to see him slowly get even/revenge on his mother and the people involved. On the different note would a big twist if he also had a big 10/11 incher.

you have my interest please don't stop now i am sure he will be humiliated to the best of your ability

Partial story. Best I can give is 3*

The is no #1 after the title or "to be continued" so it must be judged as complete.

the betrayal by his mom for money is pretty bad, so if it continues be nice to see them get their comeuppance

This is a very good start to what could be a very good and interesting story.

Really nice start love to see where u take it

TOO SHORT. LEFT ME HANGING

Great start! Please continue!

I do want more please

This is a wonderful start to what could be a really exceptional story. An update should be done asap to keep the momentum. 💋

Veronica

There needs to be more off this

hope it continues

Why not a few more chapters, such a great start and no more so far... Be nice to

read more of what happens...Hugs and Kisses Betty jo xoxo

Please continue this story, it really needs to go further xx

How humiliating! A delicious scenario. Please don’t keep us waiting for more.

Looking forward to reading more. Great concept.

What a fun start to story. I’m already anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Please don’t make me wait.

There has to be continuation of this. Haven't read one quite like this in a long time!! Has to be continued!!! Xxx

very hot story we need a part 2

See a lawyer, sue your mom, femme up and Patty. SO easy to rape them in Court.

I love this so much better than your other story

If I was Alex I'd ask how much of that million was his then I'd make sure it was paid into my account then I'd move out and make my ex mother pay for her own bills seeing as she sold me she doesn't get my money or my loyalty and if my sister wants my help to go to school she can ask me nicely

I like where this could lead! Keep going!

Very nice .. please continue when possible ☺

Please continue this was a fun read

Should have been continued

please chapter two, Need to see were this is going.

This is a much better story then your other works

I hope he wears nylons and heels.

What I do hope to see he holds out for a year and gets revenge on them. Especially his mother, Lazy Princess's sister, Olivia for mocking him and that cunt Patty. I just hope he doesn't get sold and on a new contract... I also he doesn't allow access to his money with his mom. I hope he ignores his family like stops calling his Mother Mom. I hope he calls her Jess or Boss No more acknowledgment they are family. I do hope to see repercussions like they get kicked out from the church and old friends leaving her. What about his peers too he got humiliated the worst way.. I hope he sues the shit out of them . Weep what you stow. Just my thought.

Is there a part 2? This is such a good story but I want to know what happens over the next year?

I agree hole heartily I’ve read a lot of these stories and they are all good but the male always submits and never fights back and then either the story never gets finished because the author drops off the face of the earth or the author writes other stories and forgets about this one and us readers who are left wondering.

Did he work out his contract, and discover he liked to dress and lived a happy life (just with out the evil controlling bitchs)

Did he work out his contract then disown his family and walk away from them and his mother is left with regret for her lost son that she doesn’t know what happened to.

Or did he “as another reader wrote he worked the contract out but never acknowledged his relationship to his mother and sister ever again the sued them for his money that he worked for.

Or did he use that year to learn everything about them and to improve his computer skills so he could use his new skills and knowledge to screw over everyone of them and take away what they prize most there money.

Or maybe a mixture of all of them or part of them.

We will never know until someone writes the next part