All Comments on 'A Jock in the Machine Ch. 05'

Glad I can read chapter 5 here, I usually read the story on FP but it seems it's shut down for the time being. I can't wait for the date, and can't wait for more teasing from Tim neither !

Please release the next part quickly, can't wait

The chapter should be up by wednesday.

now I wish I was tim

So this chapter proves you can write and develop characters, so why all the rape and violence in the first few chapters?

And this, perverts and gentlemen, is the way to make a novel

I wonder how Cassie would feel if she found out Tim had been riding the hobby-horse with six other women, without him ever telling her?

Novel?

A comic book maybe.

Cassie, "I love you too Tim. I also love raping boys who piss me off, so watch yourself!"

Big kiss.