by PupBayou
I rarely make comments, but I thought that I'd just offer a little encouragement. Look at your ratings. Alot of people love this tale and look forward to more. Don't let a few asswipes make you feel bad! Write on!
I like to read intelligent and creative stories. I will be reading and rereading this story! Thank you
wow, sorry if people feel like belittling others efforts to make themselves better. This is a perfectly fine story with a lot of detail. If you don’t like it, read something else. If you have suggestions, make them in the spirit of improvement otherwise they are not truly meant as recommendations or help.
I look forward to your new chapters, and this was another great one. I love your attention to detail.
Wait, so if "Alice" is the Goddess of the Sun which wanted to protect "humanity" all those years ago. Why did she participate in the invasion and destruction of the last "Human" kingdom?
Alice was betrayed by humanity and imprisoned for millennia. Her view has understandably changed about them for the most part. This gets covered more in what is to come.
I really appreciate the support guys. Thank you.
I greatly appreciate your story telling. It is counterintuitive, but a good plot, passion in the character building, and good world setting are essential for all good erotica. It sets your story above many others in so many ways. Hopefully one day you will sell books in this genre or perhaps another: -) I would buy for sure
Also, thanks yall! I definitely plan of releasing some books one day, so thank you for the encouragement. Thrilled to hear the elements are still mostly landing. Next chapter should be up soon, as i've just submitted it. Hope you enjoy.
Not going to continue reading...you said earlier on that there were a lot of different ways you could've taken this line and this one has gotten so far off the initial track that I've lost interest. I'll give you 3* for this chapter in light of getting this far. Best of luck with other readers, maybe I'll check if you write something other than this line.
Your style and story lines are excellent. The twists are entertaining and the characters have depth and a refreshing compassion. Dark elements help emphasize the optimism as the story conveys. Keep going and don’t be discouraged.