All Comments on 'A Kiss'

I SO want to be kissed like that! Loved the story Lukky...made me VERY warm on this extremely cold night.

More please...

Keep up the good work ! :)

"You kissed me! My head drooped low on your breast

With a feeling of shelter and infinite rest,

While the holy emotions my tongue dared not speak,

Flashed up as in flame, from my heart to my cheek;

Your arms held me fast; oh! your arms were so bold --

Heart beat against heart in their passionate fold.

Your glances seemed drawing my soul through mine eyes,

As the sun draws the mist form the sea to the skies.

Your lips clung to mine till I prayed in my bliss

They might never unclasp from the rapturous kiss.

From You Kissed Me by Josephine Slocum Hunt"

This was incredible. I enjoy all your work but this one really says quite a lot of things. Wonderful job, Lukky. I look forward to more great things from you. It was worth waiting for...

" Out of a world of laughter

Suddenly I am sad. . .

Day and night it haunts me,

The kiss I never had.

From Midsummer by Sydney King Russell"

A very welcoming kiss that I'm sure no one in their right mind would deny you. Well I am not always in my right mind and I wouldn't deny you. Thanks for the kiss!

The imagery was excellent. . . I need one of those kisses.

Going back to read more of your submissions.

I want that kiss - I wanted to be her right then and still. I am going back to read more!