by SassyLynn
Wonderful start! Can't wait to read more! Keep them cumin and we will all be UP for more!
I thought this was beatifully written but you must not keep us in suspense. Please post the remainder very soon because I loved it.
I read this and realized again, most of us have the same hopes and fears. She writes with a very real and truthful feel, and has a touch for the little semantics of a situation. This touches on the innocent and the not so innocents of humankind, and I like that alot. Plus a realist in the sense she's comfotable with who she is, and where she's coming from. I wish I could write like this!