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by naxet

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please be precise. Such errors are very distracting.

Why write

" "He went inside with Marcy." Jim said casually, "

when it is Scott who is speaking?

jasonnhjasonnhabout 14 years ago
Nasty

An In Your Face revenge fuck. Short and sweet. I'm not sure why Marcy was crying, she just got hers. I guess she was stupid enough to think she could get away with it.

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