All Comments on 'A Kiss Goodbye'

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jasonnhjasonnhabout 14 years ago
Nasty

An In Your Face revenge fuck. Short and sweet. I'm not sure why Marcy was crying, she just got hers. I guess she was stupid enough to think she could get away with it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please be precise. Such errors are very distracting.

Why write

" "He went inside with Marcy." Jim said casually, "

when it is Scott who is speaking?

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