All Comments on 'A Knight Broken Ch. 05'

I'd be interested in seeing another story like this! The adaptive body and nourishing cum aspects are great. It reminds me of "Deathclaw in the Long Grass", another story like this. I'd love to see what kind of transformations you could come up with.

It's a good chapter but It feel like you just gave up here. There was so much more potential in this story.

Thank you for the kind words! I will look up Deathclaw in the Long Grass for sure. As for giving up, I admit I felt stuck and that I've told everything I wanted to tell about these two characters. I started the series in a whim so it was more of a "make it up as we go" situation. I've learned from my mistakes so the next series will be made up with individual stories about the protagonist's encounters during her adventure.

Delightful story. Very interesting idea.

I loved this series. I wished they had baby dragon/knight hybrids though! I was hoping he would stop calling her his whore and accepted her as a partner and develop affection. Guess I just hoped for this erotica to have a traditional happy ending!

Love the series. Wish you continued it, to see how Clara adjusts