by goodlooks
thank you for your effort and time in writing. Good so far. But, where is the rest of the story, as Paul Harvey used to say? No background on wife's new attitude or where she was taking this. If this is a multi-part story, you must indicated that, such as "Ch. 1."
I like the way you left the backstory and continuation for we, the readers, imagination to fill in. On the other hand a great sequel wouldn't come amiss. But if not, it's a good story as it stands, and for a first story it's great. A lot better than my first one LOL.
I like where this story is going. Can't wait to read the continuation. Personally, I don't care for the cross-dressing part, but that is just me. However, I respect your wife wanting to equal the field because she "was trying on something new", so you should too.
Please don't hold back on the details on the next part of that night (or other nights to follow).
Love the start, can't wait for the middle, and of course the finale! Hope they're not too far off because the start has me soooooo excited!
whens the rest cumming out? You got us all started and we want to see the end
Great cliffhanger or first chapter. Can't wait to see if this night continues.