All Comments on 'A Lazy Keyholder Wife'

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Lord_GroLord_Gro9 months ago

This is actually a pretty decent story, even if femdom and male chastity aren’t really kinks of mine. It’s especially good given that English is not your native language.

That having been said, it doesn’t read like satire or humor to me. It reads like it’s miscategorized, and should properly be appearing in BDSM or Fetish.

I rate it at a solid 4 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Even though English is not your native language, your writing is better than 80% of the authors on this site with few editing errors. Did not like the interruption on the middle of the story. Cages not my thing, but entertaining story.

Mfj

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I’ve read a couple of your articles. I like the way you tell what they might be thinking!

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History teacher, and storyteller. Non-native English speaker. Married, father of a son, author of non-fiction books and articles for scientific journals. I am curious to read about the motivations and doubts of characters, their insecurities, and their weaknesses. Often in ...