by wellworn
I really enjoyed your writing...... Having said that I found the story disappointing. Maybe the meaning/purpose of the story went over my head (I have no doubt). But you do write very well, of that there is no doubt. 53/M.
Hi, Thanks for the feedback. This was the first story I submitted to Literotica and I failed to add any preamble which might help people who read the story out of context. The story was an entry in a Valentine's Day competition. I simply played the theme of receiving an anonymous farewell electronic Valentine Card. Going by the competition voting score I think a more explicit statement in the story itself might have helped at the time. It was a bit obtuse.