All Comments on 'A Little Help from a Friend'

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muskyboymuskyboyover 4 years ago
very nice

Could have been in Romance with another page. Love the emotion. Gentle, loving and erotic. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice premise

Whole first part -- before the end of the sex -- was great. After that, it needed something... perhaps some touching and teasing post-orgasms to keep the tension going. Something as a lead-in to whatever was to come next.

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