All Comments on 'A Little Team Building'

by ShelbyDawn57

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Anthony1965Anthony1965over 1 year ago

I really liked this story. I liked how the first night went and how their relationship progressed.

pervynagakingpervynagakingover 1 year ago

I really liked it. It's unusual for "sudden feminization" stories to have the main character feel comfortable this quickly, but it didn't feel out of place at all and was quite inspiring. Really good.

dianefritz30dianefritz30over 1 year ago

What a fun story, i have been in sales my whole life and have thought of many guys taking me and making me there sissy woman, but now that i am older and and not so slim i realize i just have to be diane and give good head and please my man or men when ever i can. Loved the story and hope to read lots more from you. Thanks for bringing back memories from years gone by or is it bi? Diane

EricaDoesNowEricaDoesNowover 1 year ago

You have great stories, and this one satisfies!. I was hesitant, with the beginning, as I'm not into guy on guy, but you so smoothly turned it around. Love it!

AeneaTAeneaTover 1 year ago

This was an amazingly fun romp! Sexy as all get-out, and Leslie being empowered by being taken advantage of was the icing on the cake!

DaymosDaymosover 1 year ago

Another great story :) I know it's not easy to write a story after a story as you do. But I wish they were longer, more detailed, so I could enjoy them longer. As always keep up the good work. And I can't wait to read more of your work :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I can't get enough of your stories! They are fantastic, They always get me where I need to be lol. I look for your new stories every time I'm on this site. Keep sending them our way. Thanks.

SabrinaGLangtonSabrinaGLangtonover 1 year ago

Very nice Shelby thanks for getting me out of the cold for a little while. I love the progression of Leslie's feminization; it was so satisfying knowing 'she' and Steve were staying together. Thanks for sharing...

DommeCatDommeCatover 1 year ago

I loved the refreshing deviation from the standard 'turning the smaller guy into a sissy whether he likes it or not 'and 'smaller guy is gay but doesn't know it' tropes. Five stars.

MissCDMichelleSMissCDMichelleSabout 1 year ago

What a happy story. Everything cumming together and a very dreamy ending.

tvlove007tvlove0079 months ago

Leslie foe filled the desires that were buried deep until she was fucked for her first time. I would like to have traded places with her at certain points in my life. I love how your stories allow a gurl to live through your gurl characters.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Awesome!!!! I loved your story so much. πŸ˜πŸ˜‹πŸ˜˜. Too bad they don't have a twenty star rating. So I could only give it a five star rating 😏

Kathryn65Kathryn657 months ago

Utterly Scrumptious, I loved reading this sensual tale of cohesion , it simply hit my buttons xxx

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I enjoy your stories because thoughts and feelings are also involved.

SuddenlyMaddieSuddenlyMaddie4 months ago

I don't know how I missed this one! The acceptance of dick in ass seemed a little rushed, but I have no complaints, otherwise. I loved the play of power between them and the little gotcha moment at the end. Thank you for sharing. πŸ₯°

ashlandlitashlandlitabout 2 months ago

Your character development is second to none. I love how you slowly got Leslie to discover who she is. Wonderful!

Kathryn65Kathryn6530 days ago

Two in a day , I simply luv your writing style , it’s intriguing and intricate. Thank you for sharing your craft . xxx

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Authors Notes: Lots going on right now. Wanted to give everyone a big heads up. The authors got together and challenged each other to write stories in exactly 750 words. Never one to back down from a fight, I wrote and submitted six. They span several categories; 2 Sci-Fi/Fa...