All Comments on 'A Loaded Proposal Ch. 06'

Ya know this was kinda gross and Steven was an absolute piece of shit.

I really disliked Steven. How could he even inject himself into someone elses marriage as he did? Selfish piece of shit. Lucy imagined it was worse, but how could it be worse than what it was?

Kind of a melancholy ending to a relationship that was time limited anyway.

Good story overall. And to the commenters who seem to forget the word “story”,

learn to suspend reality and embrace the story for what it is. Quoting the movie Stripes,

“lighten up Francis…”

Marvin

I Agree with Marvin. Until you have walked in their shoes, what right have you got to criticize!? This is the 21st century. You can bet it happened all throughout history. My opinion is that monogamy started from jealousy, as very few other !living creatures are, and to say nothing of the feelings Steven and Sarah had for each other. Remember, IT'S A STORY!!! Keep writing.

XYZ