All Comments on 'A Long and Winding Road'

Floor/ground

Tenses wrong and can't keep story straight.

EDITOR EDITOR EDITOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Perfect little short story! Keep writing!

I agree it was a good premise but hard to follow due to bad editing.

To the anon who said we should keep all the badly-written stories off LE: Can that include ALL the furry (werewolves are furries, don't tell me otherwise) and vampire stories?

I like potatoes. Not really sure why I had to say that...

Anyway, good story, but could use some improvement, like how the scene had a tendency to flow just a little to much like water, you know what I mean?