All Comments on 'A Long Stormy Night Ch. 02'

... is called 'lightning' NOT 'lightEning'!!

'Lightening' is what happens when you make things lighter!!

Plus, you don't seem to be able to decide which 'Tense' you want to write in.

A poor story made worse by un-necassary errors.

Enjoying the story, great plot development. Consider utilizing an editor to catch a few grammatical oversights. I'm eagerly awaiting the update, ignore the anynomous jerk wad. Obviously he lacks talent and gather psedo-courage from maligning others. There is no constructive criticism being offered just jealousy and hatred, pity.

you still have a chance with your next story. but having fans like decadent makes it really difficult to make a step further, no class.

Good thriller. Flow is great, it's more then about sex.

What's next. Fuck the haters. Keep it up.