All Comments on 'A Long Time Ago Ch. 03'

Liked the first two chapters, but this one was terrible. The wife was mentally unbalanced or even disturbed and he wasn't helping by facilitating her. If it was just pussy, he should have been happy with Marge. Why complicate things with such misogynistic behavior?

Well, at least the husband can't be accused of being boring. He is a truly misogynistic pig who thinks with his dick and is not capable of love. That retirement resort is soon to have an epidemic of STDs. Order the penicillin and viagra now!!!

He is kind of a hard ass, I would say.

Load of crap.I can understand her wanting him back,but not to the extent of fucking Barry to please him,or watching him fuck Margie to be able to stay with him.Judging by Barry's attitude she is extremely attractive and should have no shortage of suitors.

As good as the first 2 chapters were, this one was terrible.

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Such a huge mistake to let her back into his life…no matter what crazy and stupid scenario of a relationship.

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Mary is broken. She broke herself. If Dave had a shred of care for her left, the last thing he needed to give her was him in any way, shape, or form.

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2 **

Well written.

The counselor is demented, the wife is mentally ill and needs true counseling

The husband is an unworthy, unforgiving, self-centered man incapable of true love.

Unfortunately the story seems too true to live.

A sad society where people who need real help in the mental health field are unlikely to find it.

The author deserves praise for a work well done.

Fucking awful story, not a single likeable character.

I think the doctor is wrong, and her advice was wrong. I don't know if you can redeem the husband if you gave this husband another chance at becoming a normal man that was once capable of loving his flawed wife. I must say idk how your writing can redeem him even with counseling sessions.

Did not like it. Found it very demeaning.

To quote from another's comment, "In the first 2 chapters you created a despicable wife. In the third a despicable ex-husband." I would agree. in the first two chapters the husband was a saint and portrayed as the poster boy for perfect mental health recovery. Then in chapter three he inexplicably turns into a vengeful bastard. As eroticism goes, I found his treatment of the slut ex quite hot. But his Jekyll to Hyde transformation wasn't at all believable.

Interesting dilemma. Keep writing. Your brain is a thing of beauty.

I thought this was an excellent series. Surprised they weren't all rated higher. I gave three 5's.

What happened here was well within the bounds of possibility. Not probable, but possible. The first two chapters dealt with two people struggling to maintain some sense of sanity. This one shows the reaction they have to insanity. Both of them have gone beyond their own sense of reason. In this case, one can apply the folkway understanding that insanity is doing the same thing over and over again while expecting different results.

Wow! Twenty years ago I divorced my wife for the same reason. Only difference was she married the guy involved 6 months later. It took me years of therapy to recover just like your story. Just like your character, I moved to Florida to the same kind of community and lots of widows and singles. However, I don't expect my "Mary" to ever appear on my doorstep. Thanks for reminding me of the good and bad of my twenty years of marriage and the good decision I made. I do agree with others that the third chapter was a little off the rails, but actually I do believe it could happen. Just not to me. I could never accept and enjoy that kind of relationship.

Should've stopped at Part 2. This one jumped the curb and sped down the straightaway right into the stupid-as-shit hairpin curve. It's back there in the woods somewhere, shouldering. 1 star rating because zero ain't an option.

OK, I'm pretty sure this was the author's attempt to address some of the shortcomings in radk's "Statute of Limitations." In that story, the husband discovers his wife was all-out in love with another man for three years when their son was young. The lover dies in a car accident but the wife keeps all of the love notes, pics (pornographic and non-pornographic) as well as other mememtos in an old makeup case. The husbands finds the case containing the notes and the story goes on from there. In that story, like this one, the wife doesn't believe she did anything wrong and, eventually, the husband comes to terms with the betrayal and they both move forward together. Which, of course was the big shortcoming of that story (her love for the other man was innocent and beautiful) that LynnGKS addresses here. radk's story made me very angry and that probably explains why he didn't allow comments.

Anyway, as far as this story goes, I think it was good in that it helps the wife understand that she DID betray her husband and cheat on him. The first two chapters were very good. Third chapter went off the rails and certainly ventured into the ridiculous territory.

Looks like radk and LynnGKS haven't written anything in almost a decade. Unfortunate.

Isn't it wonderful the power words have to arouse strong emotion? But that's what good writing is all about, right?

Okay, I have to agree with several recent commenters (didn't go too far back) that the CONTENT of the first two chapters was coherent and formed a fairly straightforward trajectory for the plot--a trajectory which the third chapter blew all to hell. Didn't like the character development nor the viciousness of the plotline.

I would actually argue that the third chapter was virtually a DIFFERENT story with a different plot--one which could have/would have/may still have promise for development but in a different section--that being BDSM. There are several directions that story could be taken; someone go for it. But as a pit stop on the Long Time Ago Loving Wives storyline the third chapter sucked. Sorry. But as a leadoff for a BDSM it has great promise.

Kudos and thank you for the first two chapters and even the third one--I'll just keep #3 tabled for later consideration. (Rewrite it please?)

In the first 2 chapters you created a despicable wife. In the third a despicable ex-husband. Nowhere do you create anyone worthwhile. You counselor is especially repugnant! Hopefully, in a chapter 4 or sequel, they all get AIDS and die long lasting painful deaths.

Re read this. What a pathetic asshole he is. He deserves to be taken out and shot, literally.

What a poor excuse for a human being.

The Therapist needs to be next for a 9mm into the head.

Parts 1 and 2 were solid 4s

Part 3 is a clear 1 that destroys the entire story.

All up the new overall score is 1/5

I'd be very careful doing this stuff, you may well go to sleep with her meekly by your side - and wake up to see her standing over you with the "butcher knife" answer to her problems in her hands!

Don't trust her and don't let her put teeth anywhere near your silly willy!

IF the author is female she's setting the poor bastard up .......

The most hilarious thing I found in this story is he was pissed she had only slept with 2 men an she loved them both BUT it doesn’t matter how many men he forces her to sleep with it’s still love she only does it because she loves her husband so she’s slept with 3 men an it’s still all done in love an it will continue so his plan is deeply flawed. An the therapist needs her own therapist she’s a complete psycho with her own feelings for the husband clearly

The guy's a heartless ass and the "counselor" should have her license pulled for her "advice."

Parts 1 and 2 were 5s.

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This chapter is a 1.

Im not really surprised that you took what was a great story with such a well put together view of the destruction of a long marriage and ruined it with this....whatever the fuck you thought this was supposed to be.

I went and read a couple of your other piddling shit tales, thats why Im not shocked by this travesty. You have a very shitty attitude towards those who call you out on your BS, or complain about what you write. Clearly you've fragile ego and criticism bothers you to no end.

So here we are with you pulling a self destruction style unneeded ending. You're your own worst enemy. People give you kudos and you HAVE to piss all over it. Yes, you smirked and laughed but that just puts paid to how you are seen.

Probably should have stopped at 2. I mean seriously, this last one is fucked up.

Should ha stopped at Chapter 2…u would have ended up in a. High….this shit just pulled u down to the dirt …zero!

Every chapter you write is worse than the previous one. The more you write the worse you get. Please just stop.

A good story till chapter 2…then it went batshit crazy…

So a two for this chapter!

They hardly seem like the same characters.

This guy is a sadist.

He is a cunt, a real cunt. I think he needs that belt across his ass as much as she does.

To treat a woman the way he does shows us what an evil bastard he is

Scores 2/5

Author reverts to her usual, just silly cheating whore garbage.

So from an unwilling and ignorant cuckold you transformed him into a willing and supportive cuckold. Hurray! 5+±+++/5!!!

Legit_Cuckyeah_Nostra

Very interesting. This story explores dark chambers below the surface without an apology so the vehemence behind the reactions to it cannot be a surprise. I'm not sure that there is an answer to the question of why what Mary did is considered to be unforgivable. I say that because I can imagine a believable version in which her actions are forgiven and Mary and David work toward re-establishing a loving relationship. In fact, she may well be on that path as it is. Not a "reconciliation" perhaps in the sense that the marriage is reestablished, but a long-term pairing based upon friendship. Mary feels not only that she deserves to be punished, but that she NEEDS to be punished. If David doesn't lose it again, then she may reach an atonement on the other side of it. Very interesting story. Thank you.

LWlurker

A total piece of sh*t. He said "It's good to have someone love you when you don't love them back". That is bullsh*t, it is the worst. Just as bad as you loving someone and they don't love you back. I have been there , done that. An unrealistic farce. But, some parts were very good. The author just went over board.

Just pathetically bad. This author produces a lot of trash but she has hit a new low.

have you looked in the mirror lately? She's a whore yet you call him an asshole.

...is a completely cruel asshole.

...only took away from what was a very very good story..

Hi wrote toe good chapters a nd then got high on weed ...and screwed it totally up!

First two chapters where entertaining, this chapter was just teenage fantasy shit⭐️

The first two installments made some kind of sense, this instalment was just a pile of indulgent crap, all hail King Dave, because everyone has to play be his rules, don't know what message the author was trying to get across but whatever it was, sailed over my head, pile of indulgent crap

Very interesting story. I like the way it ended, I can, if I so desire, imagine them going on in the future. Or not.

Well what happens next?? This fine tale deserves to continue. I can think of some accessories to the belt that could be purchased.... seems that hubby got turned on bu the S&M activity .... more more more as they sang in the Rocky Horror Picture Show!

Great use of the unreliable narrator device. He’s deeply in love but can’t admit it, because it’ll ruin everything.

First two installments were pretty good, though still slightly flawed.

But this part was like something from left field?

WTF was the author trying to convey with this pile of crap?

Not at all in the spirit of the other two parts.

Almost as if new characters were created just to abuse the readers.

Got progressively weaker and less human and believable. Actually made me feel sorry for the ex wife and the abuse she takes. The shrink should be disbarred. Just not a good story anymore. Threw the bit about halfway through when the husband became a controlling sex hungry jerk. The writing also lost a little something style wise, but that may have been my unwillingness to weather the storm.

Should have left the story alone after chapter 2.

He was a decent guy in the original

I wanted her to be punished badly and now he is doing it I find myself detesting him

Wow

You wrote it that way I believe

I gave it 3 stars but as started commenting I changed my mind

5 stars

Read it anyway you want

Mine is mine

In this cirrcunstances, very shrewd and understandeble end. Tks

Ok... You really fucked that story up in a hurry... And i'm not talking about a little fuck up... You hiroshima'd that fucka...

-jaye-

Second chapter was clear and mature bringing a resolution to both characters.

This chapter you went right back to the immature thoughts of a 12 year old.

Blood awful.

She remains a whore and he a a pussy voyuer, partner swapping, sad sack loving a fantasy with like mind kinky deviants. Good whimp can't find love but cheap retired whores.

First it was his pain, then it was his being an asshole to use her love to make her pay for the twenty years of his memories that she'd fouled for him. The story is so well written that I wish it would be a happier one or at least satisfying, but no, it's has a miserable finish ... or maybe....

This story in all its parts is the best synopsis of the female mind I have read on this site.

It summarizes how a woman's need to feel attractive, be able to inspire desire in the male species, and remain youthful allows her to romanticize her betrayal so as not to feel guilt even though she knows what she is doing is morally wrong and could destroy the very basis of her married relationship.

It is vanity, selfishness and delusion commixed into a toxic formula that can only hurt the people most dear to her.

I think in many women it is the result of our cultures' emphasis on physical beauty, feminine behavior, youth, and self centeredness. When Mary perceives that she is losing those traits she seeks reinforcement in her lover. He of course doesn't have to support her, help raise the child, maintain the home, and be a loving companion even when he is tire, ill, under job pressures, etc. So the lover becomes the confirmation of her sexual attractiveness while her husband supports her image of mother, wife, friend and helper.

It's a sure formula for the disaster that destroys her marriage.

Her behavior in part 3 is the result of her realizing too late that she has lost the only man she truly loved. It seems to me that she is trying to give to Dave the physical satisfaction that she gave to her lover so many years ago i.e. to fire his lust, sate his sexual appetite, and satisfy him better than any other woman. She doesn't ask for support, caring, exclusivity, or family ties. Even the love that she professes is not the mature love of a wife but the fantasy love she romanticized with her lover.

In her mind she wants to build new, significant, and pleasant memories in a fundamentally new relationship with Dave. She seems to be creating the same relationship she had with her lover. A relationship that she eventually had to admit to herself was not based on mature love but a fantasy that allowed her to see herself as a woman in love rather than the reality of the whore she was. She's now her ex-husband's whore.

Dave understands this and is ambivalent about the probability of success but isn't going to look a gift horse in the mouth especially when he has plenty of options if Mary tries to evolve the relationship into something he doesn't want.

A great story superbly written.

I didn't address your writing. I thought it was crisp, well composed with good pacing.

Thanks for the read...and dare I say it, enjoyed the ending. I hope those last six words are not a sword of Damocles, waiting to fall and once again and have her end up on top again. Consequences on not staying even. Ex wife taught me that.

You should stay even...but you can never get even, it's either one up or one down. Make her suffer...I don't care, do you?

5*s

This entire story was a piece of crap. Don't quit your day job. She tortures him when they're married and he's pissed about it. Now he's torturing her when they're not married and she's pissed. All these two do is torture each other. Pretty sick.

I liked the first two parts, this one was a pile of horses manure. Your lifestyle reminded me of an actor by the last name of Harris. can't remember his first name. he came out in a movie called "A man Called Horse." He came out in another movie like what you describe as how you live now. White t-shirt khaki shorts never changed them through out the movie, didn't bath and hardly shaved. Thats what I was seeing in you. Anyway, in the second story she said that she realized didn't love her boyfriend, it was just the sex and the excitment it brought reminding her of how her husband used to be. but here it says she loved him. So which is it? Anyway you had a good story going and then you tore everything down with this version, it just ruined everything you had started, just to try to make you look. good? I didn't understand what you were trying to convey about yourself in this last segment. But It didn't turn out good. It just made you look as a vengeful, unforgiving, bloodthirsty sob just wanting to hurt the person that truly loved you. Sorry I read this part. Wish I hadn't.

Doctor made the wrong call. Ex-husband is abusing Mary mentally. Send her away if he really loved her.

First two chapters were interesting, then this train wreck brought the entire story to a screeching halt.

This guy talks to his wife in a disguise as a devil and he doesn't recognize her? Bullshit, he was married to her for almost 30 years. Just from hearing her voice, he would know who she was! As her being a whore now, why would he want her back. All his buddies at his resort have been fucking her. There is no way he would reconcile with the slut! She told him that she was in love with her lover who died. She was not in love with husband although she loved him ( like a brother, lol). When she fucked husband she was always think of her lover, that is what she stated. What a slut!

I liked it. I liked reading it. I liked all three episodes. And now that I've read some of the comments from "anonymous" I like it even better. It's good to know what side you line up on in life.

In your dreams man, in your dreams. ONE STAR

Wow. Contorted. Interesting. I'd have written it differently, but I am not the author! You did an interesting story...would have been OK for him eventually get his head out of his ass and fall in love with her. Yep.

I'm not commenting on this story which is pure shit, but on your post about your slut wife that fucked other men for ten years of your married life, and she was planning on leaving you for one of her fuck buddies, until he wanted her to participate in a three way, and she was offended, she was a whore that's what they do. After thirty years she confesses to you, and you forgive her. Was it a death bed confession? If it wasn't your a bigger wimp and a fool then some of the cuckolds that are written about in stories on this site. Your user name suits you well ( widowedidiot ) .

Great recovery from him; from a cuckold husband to a pathetic cruel bastard. What was the point of the story please?.......

Do you take LSD or peyote to come up with your delusional concept of human behavior?

does not equate to becoming an a.....e. He obviously lost his way after she lost hers

Should have left it at the end of Ch 2.

This started out as a very beautiful story. I really liked it. Until the end. I feel turning the wife into a whore messed up the whole story. In my opinion the husband is the one that needed the therapy. I don think she could have said anything that was going to change his mind. When my late wife confessed her affairs. there were a lot of questions that I was not satisfied with the answers. However I forgave her and learned to live it. It took her thirty years to tell me of her ten year affairs with different men. In my wifes case she had planned on leaving me for her lover. What changed her mind was that he decided he wanted a threesome and brought a friend to their bed. Knowing I would never disrespect her like that made her change her mind. This story started off with so much optimism. But the last page killed it for me.

I know how the husband feels. My wife fell in love with another man years ago, it was a platonic affair. This man encouraged her affection for him. My wife continued to have sex with me, which she considered disgusting, while loving him, I actually encouraged her to have sex with him so that he would not appear so perfect, and that I could win back her love. It got to the point that she verbalized wanting me to die, since he had rejected wanting to break up our family. Ironically, he died from wounds sustained in a car accident. This event provided my wife and I an opportunity to focus on our marriage, however I know she still has feelings for him though they are diminishing in time. I would say that the betrayal of love is more painful then that of sex. I think in this story Dave is pushing Mary to separate sex from love by making her sleep with Barry which she doesn't want to do, hoping she will put her former lover into that same category, and he will reclaim more of her love. Dave doesn't realize it but he madly loves Mary

Disgusting ending.

Seriously deranged outcome.

Making her whore herself out to other men was over the limit.

I hope he dies with his penis cut off.

What an asshole!

I am not sure which was worse.

The story or the comment from THIS moron: Anonymous 05/11/16

I have not figured out whether this anonymous is a Hillary scum want to be cheating cunt trying to justify her betrayal of someone that loved her or:

a sissified submissive cuck that sits around in frilly knickers hoping for some cream pie from his wife

This was a pretty good story until the ex wife tracks him down, becomes his whore and he starts to abuse her. I don't think he has any right to abuse and degrade her, no matter what happened before. If he has no love left for her, tell her, and tell her to move on. Pimping her out to his friend so he can watch is not only abusive, it's sick.

feminism 101. . . . . . lulz

Pimping her out ain't no memory to enjoy.

and think he is not a free-bird but a confused do-do- TK U MLJ LV NV

As strange as it sounds, this is more believable to me than some. I worked in counseling for many years, got burned out on it and went back to my first love - History. Anyway, this is VERY difficult for men to understand but women know it intrinsically. Women can love multiple men with similar intensity and devotion, all that the same time! We do it with fathers (yes the sex act does not generally occur but there is always a sexual component - ALWAYS). It has to do with development, when a girls breasts start to develop very suddenly she is noticed. Let me tell you, I was 12 and 30 B. That is healthy cleavage let me tell you. I was "noticed" by boys, men (young old, rich/poor) believe me. I was also noticed by women. Other girls were cruel, their mothers worse ("... you better watch her, with those tits she will be pregnant by 16. Probably already fucking around....").

When you get into your prime (16-25) we are ready for any cock that comes along, we ALL want them and believe me we want them ALL! The thing is, we have learned that men are dangerous, that boys don't take no for an answer, and we are stuck being pregnant and we will carry all of the shame for it. NOT THE FATHER. So we suppress it, pretend we don't want them to look at us, hunch our shoulders, carry our books and purses over our boobs to try and hide them....

That is when nature gets really nasty. We discover that we have a VASTLY larger capacity to feel complex emotional states with MANY more people than boys/men can. We are told that we can't love more than one man, only because MEN can't commit and love more more than one woman. It is not a limitation on us but THEM.

The man in this story is an excellent example. He simply can't imagine that fact. The "counselor" clearly has no understanding of all woman's capacity to love an nurture multiple highly gratifying and healthy emotional and even sexual relations. (written by a man clearly).

The truth is, MEN should get over themselves. Understand that their relationship with a woman (any woman) is just one facet of her vastly greater capacity to have unique healthy and mutually gratifying relationships. She is in no way cheating her husband. He was the one who decided to get emotionally upset and jealous by the situation. She was happy, he was happy. If she had just put the letters in a safe deposit box, he would have gone to his grave being happy and never known the difference. The truth is, HE had the problem not her.

Not really to my tastes, but the originality and how well written it was deserve a 5!

to menage a trois -- back to the future, or the past.

for a man he is------ hes turned into a cheap pimp i have more respect for her

@sugna I agree you with 100%. Yes a short time Beach Bum life style with adventures for forgetting his cheating wife yes, but after 1-2 years to look for a newer mate it would be a better future and the whore wife roleplay secret aim was a nightmare only not a possibility.

Besides my criticizm for the long term Beach Bum lifestyle I think this story is much better than "Statue of the Limitations", where the Deep Depression with almost successful suicid and reconciliation were the answers to the old cheating affair. Here the husband divorced..........I do not offend the main character to fuck a free of charge pussy without reconciliation, but this was the result and danger of the Beach Bum lifestyle. Because the kids they have to do a Civil method, but the sex is not part of the Civil Connection.

However he did not reconcilied luckily.

the first two chapters are very similar to a story called ( statute of limitations ) in the romance section. In that story the wife had an affair with married doctor whom she claimed she love just as much as she loved her husband . The doctor was killed in a car accident , she was so distraught when she learned of his death she grieved for a month or more . Her husband discovered the letters and photos when he was building the basement room, and the wife was on a cruise . Anyway he went into deep depression and tried to commit suicide , they ended up going to counseling where it was determined that she could and did love to people with the same love for both and they lived happily ever after , to which I wrote a comment that is was bullshit but my comment is floating around some where in cyber space. Part 3 is just awful in this story but 1 and 2 were very good because even after 20 years finding out your wife had an affair that lasted 3 years and only ended because her love got killed not because she ended it. In both stories the wife was in love with her fuck buddy, so tell me how could a man reconcile to a woman that was still in love with a ghost , hed have to less then a man. I know that these stories are just that but try to inject reality in to it.

As many have said who was he in Chapter 3? No man could change like that, if he did then he was just a pathetic looser. A loud-mouthed immoral mean bastard losing all sympathy from the readers.

Not a good ending.

This series is excellent. I don't remember who wrote the first story with this plot line that I read, but the one thing that stuck in my mind was that the counselor agreed with the wife that it was possible to love two people at the same time. That's wrong and it's stupid. The conclusion to that story ended up with a reconciliation that was just as wrong and just as stupid.

Your story hit the nail on the head. Mary was wrong to have the affair, and her refusal to take responsibility for the harm she had done was equally wrong. Once she finally began to understand the harm that she had caused to her marriage and to her husband she finally turned into a whole person.

The only problem I have is the same as Javmor, except I disagree with his conclusion. It's true that Dave wasn't the same person in part 2 as he was in part 3. In part 3 he clearly had not put the hurt behind him, and he was coping by staying disengaged, and not developing healthy relationships with women. That man was much more believable than the saint in part 2.

Both Dave and Mary were deeply harmed by her infidelity, and it looks as if neither is going to fully recover. I guess they're doing the best they are going to be able to do to find satisfaction with their lives going forward.

Thanks for this work - it's truly outstanding.

Hated this ending. The man in chapter two and the man in this chapter are two different people. In chapter two, he truly wanted to help his ex-wife. THAT man had truly moved on. He no longer harbored any ill will toward her. He was selfless and an honorable man.

THIS man was a childish asshole who needed his ego pumped. Any man who needs to demean a woman to feel better about himself isn't much of one.

Would have liked to see the wife move on with her life just as her husband did. That would have been a happy ending.

This was an interesting, compelling story of a woman who made an unfortunate mistake that injured her marriage many years later. Much of the story was well put together but the ending is terrible, a wrong set of suggestions from the therapist to the ex husband, and with the indication that he did not hate his ex, his actions were totally wrong for someone who should be a bit more mature than a guy in his mid 50s. Good scores for Chs. 1 & 2 but not for 3.

Tiny Tim

The ex husband is far worse than the ex wife, by a long shot.

I figured this story could not be as bad as the comments made out. OMG was I wrong! What a fucked up piece of shit. I can not add anything to what's already been written only: Fuck I wish I had never read this!

The first time all I could think about was how many of these "Loving Wives" stories are really "Stupid Wives" or "Mentally ILL Wives". Now when a re-read this story all I could think of was what would I do in the same situation. With the kids full grown, I too would divorce her. Life is too short for a bad marriage. I do not think I would go out seeking a cheesy low rent swinging lifestyle in Florida. I think that after 30 years or so of adult life and some maturity I would take a break and then start looking for a suitable companion. Let's face it, most of us do not marry our one and only true love. We simply get married and if we are decent, reasonably intelligent people we learn to love our spouse and children as our family grows. Some of us who are selfish and short sighted, do not really learn to love - they cheat. Unfortunately for them, this act of cheating and self justification stops their spiritual development and they wind up stunted. If I were him, I would seek out a woman that had grown with age and would be a good choice to spend the next 30 years or so in her company. They are out there, I meet them all the time! The writing is still good.

and didn't like the way the situation was handled there at all. The first 2 chapters of this version were much better. The third chapter just disintegrated into fantasy.

Maybe one day I'll get around ot writing my own ending to the storey.

Thanks. Well done.

Thanks for the effort.

Sure she deceitfully tricked him for twenty years, but she was remorseful and he used that to his advantage. Albeit she did stalk him, he should have just made it clear he wanted nothing to do with her anymore. Not subject her into whoring herself out to his buddies. I'm all for BtB if the shoe fits, but I feel like it didn't really fit on this one =(.

The Illiterate here wants everyone to disregard the FACT that the Ex-Wife STALKED him to his home, (possibly) sexually assaulted him, then demanded he treat her as a WHORE.

I read my original comment and I can't believe what I wrote. That was then, this is now. (Wow. Great idea for a book title) Anyway, the fact that she's getting fucked by her husband is making her happy. The last thing she deserves is to be happy. He lost the last twenty years of his marriage because of her cheating. I don't care how good a fuck she is, I wouldn't touch her if she was the last woman alive. Having lost years myself I know what I'm saying. Fucking worthless cheating cunts.

One Star

The husband has turned into a complete a$$hole. Either forgive her and start a new life together, or send her on her way. 1 star.

the most important words in this story are the last six .

& i am not at all surprised that they seem to have been lost on most of the commentators.

THE END ... OR MAYBE .....THE BEGINNING......

with that one statement , the author is clearly inviting us all to hang ourselves

am tempted ,but no lynn you are not going to sucker punch me in that way ..

no comment on the future of these two protaganists from me .

another fine pce of writing , immense literary skill .

said it before & am sure i will say it again .. wish i had 1/10 of your ability.

(voted 5 stars)

xxxhugsxxxx

p.s

the beginning of the end.

ok ,you got me ..

suffice to say, time & experiences.

can & do change people in the most unexpected fashion.

probable ? possible ? . .. lol .... OR MAYBE ....

This even disappoints the women-hating losers like cantbuymy because they not only need the woman to always be filth, they also need the man to always be a saint. This guy has lost his "good-guy" credentials. Pick any 100 strangers and let them read the last chapter and they would all conclude that he was the bad guy and she was a psychologically-damaged victim.

Remember, in the BTB world, skanky wimmen are always shit and husbands are always Jesus. That's the formula. Stray from it at your peril. The short-dicked unemployed losers may not be smart enough to figure out exactly why they don't like it--after all, she's groveling like a cur, he's whipping her with a belt, he's fucking other women-- what's not to like, right?

But somehow it's just not satisfying. There's the creeping sensation that maybe their hero just might be an asshole and the worthless bitch might be seen as morally superior. Now for the lonely, middle-of-the-night haters, that's disturbing. Their pain-filled, narrow little world is black and white, no second thought, no second chances, even a life of being treated like a whore and being beaten with a belt is too good for the bitch. Horror of horrors! What if maybe they ended up happy? Can't have that.