All Comments on 'A Long Time from Home Ch. 10'

by Athlantian

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AardieAardie4 months ago

Did his friend survive the peaches?

AthlantianAthlantian4 months agoAuthor

Doh... Sorry about that. Yes, he did.

WretchedMonkeyWretchedMonkey2 months ago

It seems you didn't finish this sentence, "She nodded absently, obviously thinking about something, but her face changed when I added", and it never says what was added/said.

AthlantianAthlantian2 months agoAuthor

You would be right and I've looked at most of the older versions to find out what went wrong without much luck. The sentence read 'She nodded absently, obviously thinking about something." in the versions from may 2021 and before, while all the 2022 versions have the unfinished sentence. Obviously, something have happened between the two versions. I guess is that I wrote a whole sentence and then at some point accidentally deleted half of it :(

Sorry about that. And as I cannot remember what I wanted to say, I'll have to say that the sentence should read 'She nodded absently, obviously thinking about something.'

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