All Comments on 'A Long Time from Home Ch. 32'

I love your story. Both storylines are very interesting in their own ways. I slightly prefer the story set in the present time, so your current way of posting 2-3 present chapters for each one set in the past is perfect for me. Thanks for sharing your work.

Using Word as an editor is insufficient. It corrects spelling, but not proper usage.

I suggest that one of the AI based grammar checkers may be helpful.

Grammerly and Quillbot are two examples, but there are now many. None are perfect; personal checking is needed to approach that.

Your most common misusage is swapping grammatical number, mostly with auxiliary verbs such as "has" & "have" and "was" & "were" (and vis-versa. However other verbs, and often nouns, are seen switched.

As for spelling: frequent terminal "p" used instead of "b" (and v.v.). "Rip" rather than "rib" and "thump" than "thumb", etc.

I could tell in a few chapters of my binge read that English is not your native language. Thus deciphering was an added treat to my read.

Amazing! I just found this story and binged it. So good! So glad I found it! Can’t wait for the next chapters. I’m all about the story, so I’d be fine with less sex in favor of more story (though you do a phenomenal job with those scenes as well), and it’s fairly easy for me to ignore minor spelling and grammatical errors. Your writing is excellent and engrosssing. Just fantastic! Thanks for your writing! 👏

It keeps getting better and better and I'm getting less and less work done.