All Comments on 'A Love Story Pt. 01'

Can't discern a plot, no character development, poorly written so it is difficult to read and enjoy. As for romance in the traditional sense-- absent.

Brevity is the chief drawback to what should be a fine romance story. There is too little introduction to the characters and too little character development. Having the characters talk openly about their genitalia is quite odd for a romance story.

I check Literotica several times a week for new stories in multiple genres, but I'm afraid your stories are putting me off coming here. You are clearly not a gifted writer or even moderately competent. Please stick to reading and give up writing.

To the moderators - please think seriously before you allow posting of any more stories by this (I can't even say author) deluded contributor.