All Comments on 'A Love to Last Ch. 06'

When will Ben get his happy ending and Elena get what she deserves? This has been drawn out way too long!!!!

Now that's a cliff hanger and then some! I don't know what happened or why Jim is bleeding but I'm sure that that bitch Elena is behind it. The good things that came out of this chapter though, David not only saved Ben from being raped, he's also a witness to what went on in that hotel room. And he wants to come clean and tell everyone the truth which should have been done to begin with. There's something I have trouble understanding that you brought up in this chapter. If Ben and his father always did the mother's memorial together, how come he doesn't already know what happened there. As far as Jim is concerned, his character is so self-absorbed, immature and unlikable at this point, I couldn't care less if he gets hurt. This was another ***** chapter for this story, but the unending abuse that Ben has suffered throughout this is starting to get a bit tiresome. It feels like it's time to start bringing Elena's downfall and I hope the bitch falls hard!!!

I feel so bad for Ben. He just lost his only brother. But he gained a sole mate and a way out of that toxic house. I just hope the truth comes out about Elena so his Father can finally come to his senses! What that man saw in that shedevil I'll never understand but perhaps that's why Ben exists.

When will Jim realize his mother is so evil? Like wake up!! And then Ben keeps getting the crappy hand. I hope Karma comes for Elena and Jim soon regrets his words.

My earlier comment should have read that I didn't know why Jim was crying, not bleeding. I've got to stop writing things in the morning before the caffeine kicks in.

Great chapter but way too short for my liking lol. I really want to see what happens next. You have me hooked.

Everyone is so cartoonish that it's difficult to take the characters seriously. How many years of physical abuse and trauma, has Jim and the father witnessed just to continuously ignore it and act surprised?

I agree with all the comments, Elena must be caught at some point on her dirty tricks. Thr good thing though her husband Jerome is aware of her dirty tactics but has no idea how severe they are. David needs to tell the whole story how he met Ben because I can tell how this is heading to Ben being blames for everything and yet Claudia and Elena are birds of the same feather they will blame Ben. I am looking forward to your next chapter

Hi Vanalas, I saw that you had started working on another story which seemed like a continuation of "Unbroken" but with a new title "Immortal" ? You were on chapter 1 but you also deleted it. I like your angle but why was it deleted? I hope you complete this as well.