by MotherloverSon
The previous chapter was already going shit with the pegging and the fact that Brian was on the level of a 10 year old child despite his age but this? The one normal character gets humiliated, Brian goes full fucking faggot, and Heather doesn't give a shit about it all. Fucking garbage.
What a tragic wrong-turn for the series. I/T heat is all about taboo, private, secret relationships. You just blew that up. And to add insult to injury for your readers, you went gay af as well. Christ, what a train wreck.
Pretty hot stuff. Kinkier than your average incest story. Enjoyed Juliet humiliating her bratty daughter and then making it up to her by fisting her pussy.
The story is getting good as episode rolls by. Its just got one loose end. The main protagonist, Brian is coming across as a person without his own voice, thoughts or personality. Please write him a little bit better. Let him some times be active and let some kinky and depraved ideas and dialogues come from him.
I gave this story a 4.
Too much fucking everyplace. I would love to have seen a romantic story develop between the mother and the son. They could have moved to another country and started a family of their own. With Brain keeping Heather's belly filled with his babies.
Liked the story but there was to much use of Brian it was better with just his mom and juliet and maybe his teacher maybe mom and son could have made a baby! Gave it a 4 because it was just too much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
With all the sex between the trio, I expected Brian to butt-fuck Mario. That would have been the least Brian should have done.
very good follow up! I think part 3 and 4 are the best and the development of story and characters is really well done! I can´t wait to read a part 5!
This turned out like I half expected. The gay angle that pervades so many M/S I/T stories makes no sense to me but there it is - like it so often is. A stealth gay writer doing a mother-son story with heavy queer subtext. No need to be on the down-low, bruv. Just write your gay love tales in the gay male section to your heart's content. There was no need to disguise it behind all this fake mommy and fake aunt bum licking submission training nonsense.
"He circled her clit with her tongue until she could hardly stand it."
I'm not surprised she couldn't stand it, it sounds like something out of Abu Ghraib.