All Comments on 'A Lucky Guy'

I think you meant to label this as Incest, but you placed it as Interracial...

How about letting us know in the intro that the story has incest in the story plus when you start something like that try starting the story out saying how the mother and daughter got started you killed it when you started it out with the dad at a conference you took all the suspense out of it what the father was going to find .

Pat.

Atlanta,Ga.

is this suppose to be interracial?? don't see it

The ir vultures are angry, you didn’t feed them their carrion.