by manhasso
This is an amazingly well written story..... I am sure this could end up being a serialised story as there are so many directions in which you can take it...look forward to part 2
Pretty erotic with a little bit of everything thrown in. Loved it.
Sincerely,
Santacruzman
Keep this story going! I would love to see him run away with Paula and marry her!
I read this site for at least 15 years ago daily, your story is one of the most original and unique for me since those years. Although it is a bit sort but it is one I think I will never forget :) Keep writing please! And thank you kindly for sharing with us!
I just agree with the other comments - original, hot, well-written - I look forward to more . . . .
Just the right combination erotic and regular story parts. Some stories are all sex not enough context, sone stores are too long with not enough sex. You’re stories have just the right mix and are very believable.
Keep it uo
Loved the story. Great build-up and story line. Loved your work. Keep it up!!!!!
Let's have the next chapter where they all move to Atlanta for Paula's school !!!!!!
Thanks for a wonderful and very well written story, I enjoyed it very much. Please continue their adventure .
Lovely! 5 stars, but I have to say if they were fucking on the porch it better be screened in or...mosquitoes!
Fabulous- original and got me hard as nails !!!!! He has the best of ALL worlds !