All Comments on 'A Lucky Tenant'

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mammoetmammoet26 days ago
Loved it

This needs another chapter

HardfordiverseHardfordiversealmost 2 years ago

Fabulous- original and got me hard as nails !!!!! He has the best of ALL worlds !

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77over 2 years ago

Lovely! 5 stars, but I have to say if they were fucking on the porch it better be screened in or...mosquitoes!

BrendaNWBrendaNWabout 4 years ago
Hot and just plain fun

Thanks for a wonderful and very well written story, I enjoyed it very much. Please continue their adventure .

walksstrongbearwalksstrongbearabout 4 years ago
Next chapter!!!!

Let's have the next chapter where they all move to Atlanta for Paula's school !!!!!!

Kpick96205Kpick96205about 4 years ago
Beautiful

Loved the story. Great build-up and story line. Loved your work. Keep it up!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
And away we go!

Very good story! Great ratio of sex to set up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
You need to write more stories.

Just the right combination erotic and regular story parts. Some stories are all sex not enough context, sone stores are too long with not enough sex. You’re stories have just the right mix and are very believable.

Keep it uo

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Erotic

Extremely well written erotica, I enjoyed the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
more please

More please

Diane_belleDiane_bellealmost 7 years ago
Brilliantly erotic

I just agree with the other comments - original, hot, well-written - I look forward to more . . . .

mb0xmb0xalmost 7 years ago
Original

I read this site for at least 15 years ago daily, your story is one of the most original and unique for me since those years. Although it is a bit sort but it is one I think I will never forget :) Keep writing please! And thank you kindly for sharing with us!

QuidProQuo77QuidProQuo77almost 7 years ago
Don't leave us hanging

Keep this story going! I would love to see him run away with Paula and marry her!

SantacruzmanSantacruzmanalmost 7 years ago
What a duo!

Pretty erotic with a little bit of everything thrown in. Loved it.

Sincerely,

Santacruzman

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Stunning

This is an amazingly well written story..... I am sure this could end up being a serialised story as there are so many directions in which you can take it...look forward to part 2

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