All Comments on 'A Lucrative Vacation'

“I did beg for it to stop. He kept his promise though and made me take more just like I wanted him to.“

You should have either skipped these statements or explained that she didn’t use a safe word. For me those 2 statements spoiled the story. It moved the story from a highly charged erotic (genuinely consensual) BDSM scene to something unsavoury that she later forgave him for.

I appreciate that it’s possible for those statements to be interpreted differently particularly given the context of the story, because he stated exactly what he intended to do. Unfortunately there are a LOT of stories that claim to be BDSM but are instead full of wannabe dominants raping and abusing (physically/ mentally) their submissive partner.

So aside from that I loved your story, thanks for sharing.

Tess (UK)

A winner for sure. Just that there were references made to later—additional men, fisting—that would have been nice follow through.

Like I said, winner.

A fun concept to be sure, being sold off for sex I mean.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.