All Comments on 'A Mafia Family Ch. 03'

very nice to see you continue this story I was worried you died you'd be surprised how often that happens to promising writers here

Very well worth the wait.

One tiny nitpick: When Mario was ordering the prostitutes on the phone, the name Don Vincente was slipped in there. I was confused and had to go back to read that part again.

Too much story, not enough sex. Can’t believe I waited a year for that. Good story though just was expecting more.

What a fun story to read, I’m looking forward to the next one.

Why the constant smoking? Crass and most annoying.

Tony is yet to meet a femme fatale who can finish him, both in bed & otherwise! Why end the story in just 3 chapters whereas the scope of the story is much more than that? Would you be interested in taking it forward

More of these cig/cigar smoking powerful women & their taboos please

This is great.