All Comments on 'A Mage's Tale Ch. 05'

Could you please tell the characters names In the chapter so nobody else gets confused

Please do not rely only on a spellchecker. A spellcheck is dumb, it cannot tell context or meaning; for example "tail" and "tale". You need to proof read.

errors: (get an editor/proofreader....please!!)

...calling with a challenge-dual.

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...calling with a challenge-duel.

...so you get to hear the whole sorted tail first hand.

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...so you get to hear the whole sordid tale first hand.

Of coarse." Valkyrie continues,

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Of course." Valkyrie continues,

signs that this is arousing her were as Nix is watching

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signs that this is arousing her where as Nix is watching

Cross coed before

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Cross cooed before

one was the Nobel hot topic

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one was the Noble hot topic

I garb her hips

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I grab her hips

you think there is going a happy ever after

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you think there is going to be a happy ever after

Love is for regular people, she's a Nobel

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Love is for regular people, she's a Noble

Changing their names is confusing me I don't see its purpose

As others have said it needs an editor or you need to edit it carefully

Story is worth continuing

Neoshade deliberately misspells his words.It is a take it or leave it way of writing.He does it to piss off Grammar Nazis,and it looks like he's doing a Great Job so far.

Keep it up.

lots of spelling mistakes i.e loose instead of lose, etc. does not seem to have been proof read before publishing, sometimes continuity of story is lost bcos explanations are missing. Interesting story but so hard to follow the story line