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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Good.

This is good. But it felt a bit rushed.

JPFannyJPFannyabout 3 years agoAuthor

Well Anonymous,

I have been reworking this story and have expanded it to over 7 chapter now, 16K+ words and counting.

There will be more chapters to come (cum?)

FlynnTaggartFlynnTaggartabout 3 years ago
Got potential

Not a bad start but agree with the anon it feels rushed. Glad to hear its getting a proper expansion.

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