All Comments on 'A Massage for Mom's Headache'

Not quite British English - we say 'mum' not 'mom'!

hot story-hope there is another chapter

Well written. A beautiful story between a mother and her son. The writer went for a higher level of consenting partners. For a son to become intimate with his mother is a fine balance between lust and love. Between the urge of a young man to penetrate a woman and the respect and love for his mother. This is a developing story for both lovers. Five stars.

Excellent! Well written. Thank you. A slow build up and the last page was almost a wham bam type, but no, it was still nice. That she asks him to come in her, it being his first time. What a considerate mother.

The ever so slow buildup was tantalizing and made the eventual sex even more rewarding. I look forward to her "Next Headache" Maybe it'll be a migraine that will need much more intense massaging and harder fucking of her needy Mommy Pussy.

With certain writers, it's less about the story and more about the telling.

This isn't the first story of a mom getting a massage from her son that ends with his penis in her vagina, but the telling of this one belied the oft-used plot. To me, it felt fresh, all while I knew it wasn't; I liked it more than enough for the telling, so the plot didn't matter.

That's a great story-teller for you.

Thanks Jasperspen.

Very good build up. Sensitive and set for more chapters to follow.

Very nice. 5***** Loved the slowness and buildup.

A very yummy and patient start! I hope that there's more to this story. Thank you!

Loved the build up on this, good story!

Really hoping you continue this story, love your work.

Great how you manage to develop this standard set up into an original and exciting story. Love the level of detail!

Awesome story! Build up was perfectly paced. Well done

Delicious !!!

Perfectly executed! Solid plot build and characters acted/reacted to make it believable. Hope there's a part 2 - 5*

So hot, reminded me of my first time with my sister! Hit me up sometime mastevens001 yahoo

Excellent narration...keep it up

I loved it.

Like one comment said, ' Old plot, but it was fresh'.

I definitely wouldn't say no to more.

Like a well traveled road, we may have been down it before but somehow the scenery has been changed to make the trip so much more interesting. The dialog with his inner selves was very good and just added to the buildup. Loved the last comment my Mom about future headaches. Five stars.

Oh what a great build up. There are lots of one page, boring 'I always wanted to fuck you Mom' stories on here, but few written with a different twist like this. Please continue the story.

And @Grumpy23240 'Mom' is what we call her in my part of England, so stop being so grumpy!

awaiting for new encounters...

Cheap story. Neither he nor she say they love each other... learn to respect the beautiful primal bond between a Mother and her son before contaminating a sacred genre with just lust. Learn the difference between a Mother and a MILF. The writing is good, but the story bad.

Great Story! it was a real turnon for me! I can't wait for her next headache. Lol

Really hot. Made me wet like his mom

Nice premise.

Another well written story.

Nice 'reluctance' from both of them, tht ended up getting overcome.

Seems to be set up for subsequent chapters. Hope so.

Nothing with her ass. Massaging it wouldn't have been a stretch.

Yes, the absence of her touching his penis was absent, and it would have been nice if it had happened. Hopefully in the next chapter.

Five stars.

This brought back happy memories

wow, this was, by far the hottest story I have ever read......love it!!!

Fantastic! Best story I have read. Loved to slow build up to what I hoped was going to happen.

My cock is stiff as steel that was a good red

Great story.

Most highlighted part was, when his cock head was touching her pussy opening, and they looked straight into their eyes, talking, crying kissing,licking tear......I loved it because it a personal thing which I can relate with my life and have lived this moment ( not with mother).

come up with similar stories of mother and son, slow buildup , simple sex position, dialogues. No, fancy dialogues ,no exaggerating dimensions of story, no fancy sex position, addressing without slut/ whore words. (Mother saying is this your..........) These are the quality which makes you different from other writers

The pace andde tail are great. Your inner voice is a nice touch. Very erotic and stimulating. ,ooh forward to more from you.

Great love story, one of the few that are somewhat believable. It flows well without a lot of trashy talk and raunchy sex. This story ends on exactly the right note and leaves one thinking about how they might move along. I would be careful about a sequel because they usually become repetitive which diminishes the story.

Well, such an excellent read. Liked how it ended, leaving much room for more adventure with Mom. Five stars, great build up.

Excellent story and good writing with the long, slow building of passion. Watching your woman , looking deeply into her eyes as the surge of climax begins in both of you is very erotic. I do not know how he kept from coming, because i sure would not.

Great story, excellent pacing, I can't wait for more stories, please hurry up

This story has the potential to go for a long time and it has started so well. The pacing is good, the mom's angst is palpable and the son is not an impudent clown. He also really does desire his mom. Please do not introduce other people into what can turn into a truly romantic mother/son story.

I'm sorry I didn't comment before.

Incredibly erotic scene. Could picture everything written.

I see you have continued this.

Going to read chapter 2 now.

Great story so far.

Loved the build up and slow satisfaction

SHAME ON YOU ! You said you would not tell .

Well written , a little to fast but still enjoyable .

I usually prefer slower paced stories, but this was a little bit descriptive, something that many stories lack. I like it, Despite being faster paced than I usually like.

Another excellent, sexy, story.

good story, good writing. I hope you continue it. (past the 2 chapts you have so far)

Great on the pacing

Excellent build up, pace and description. I’ve already opened chapter 2 :)

A lovely story of lust and romance in small town England. In my head I am living it. 5 🌟.

Reminds me of my Mother's sister who took my cherry when I was 17. We were lovers for the next 15 years when she died in an auto accident. I loved her so much and miss her to this day.

wow! wow! who wouldn't want a loving Mom like here? much more to cum I hope.

Beautifully written, very erotic, with just a touch of humor—that impish but persuasive little voice.

Nice premise.

Well paced. Well written.

A nice beginning.

Five stars.

Well written, evocative, but wish it didn't move so fast, especially with the actual sex. There's a lot to be said for anticipation, especially in the Taboo stories.

excellent, 5 stars

Well done!

the torrent of emotion and decision is palpable. Excellent writing!

I'm little worried about reading the next chapter you almost killed this 1 with him talking to a voice in his head sounds like he needs to be on meds for schizophrenia you using it as joke basically is what did it for schizophrenia is no joking matters I know I have it and have take meds every day for the rest of my life for that as well as other very serious issues and you use it as joking matter is offensive

Wow.. mmm

Excellent story, thanks for sharing this. 5-stars.

Made me hard as a rock..

As the bi mum and lover of a gay daughter, I love this!

Sarahxxxxx

5 Stars. This is excellently told and very realistic (believable) sounding "HAIRY PUSSY MOM" story! Moms should always be hairy like this one is!

Good premise.

Nicely done.

Not rushed.

Five stars.

Very realistic n arousing.

Hot as feck 😳

Very well done, and tho most incest is anything but believable, this one drew me into the possibility of truth.

Perfect, a hairy mom "I went even lower with my fingers, definitely sliding through the top of her pubic hair now"

5 rating like all hairy pussy stories!

WOW WOW WOW!!!

What an unexpected delight! Perfectly timed increasing expectation of arousal and completion of a loving incestual act.

Great story, one of the best between mom and son! Well written, I felt like I was in the room watching all this take place.

Good story but the "voice" inside his head is lame, along with him thinking about about every little move. So unreal.

WOW You went to the top of my favorites list. An exceptional story. Loved every word.

Delicious!!!

5 Stars!

'so I am guessing that she is about 37'

struck me as such a strange sentence. He doesn't know how old his mother is? Realistic..? Nah.

Awesome! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👌

Thanks for the great read. I had no clue of my mother's or father's birthdate in my childhood or even now, so that wasn't problematic for me. The inner dialogue captured the son's angst exceptionally well and I thought you did a great job of it. Pay no heed to the readers who would rather read a 750-word stroke story, with no build-up and foregoing any emotional conflict. Great job - 5 stars.