All Comments on 'A Masters Rise'

I really loved it Thank You ! :-)))))

This feels like an excellent set up for the story to continue, and the coming out out his shell of the mc works well. Hope to see more

It seemed to have a little of the supernatural in it too which felt like a sideways step? Overall I really enjoyed this.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

I'm sorry, I couldn't make it past the first scene. If you want to be opaque about gender use the third person, "they" is just confusing. Are they both tied or just one of them? Made it impossible for me to visualise the scene and I lost interest.