All Comments on 'A Match for the el Maiens Ch. 29'

For what will happen next. Been on the edge of my seat wondering about Tashka' s fate... she bares the scars of war physically and emotionally. .. will she and Vadya be able to love each other or will the war's heavy toll keep them distant emotionally? Are Clair and Arianna ready for promotion or is the new spot light associated with being Lord van Seitter too much for them?

What are your plans for the book? I would love to be able to buy a copy.

Ooh, I have had to repost this chapter twice because for understandable reasons you're not allowed to talk about selling a book you have posted up here and I made remarks about handing out vouchers ;)

I plan a very radical re-write of the book, hopefully this summer. I have had some further additional feedback on the first chapters which I want to take on board. I also need to do something about the names.

This is the first in a trilogy of novels, with spin off novellas (some of which are already available on here but so badly written that they need to be taken down and edited too). I am very willing to email free pdfs to anyone who wants to contact me via the Feedback box and give me an email address. <3 I promise to hold a list of those people and give them updates and free pdfs of the edited novel when finished.

Another fully realized and beautifully written chapter....

Gets out the red ink removal tool....

Oh Batren, worth his weight in gold!