by Jade298
The story was awesome! I loved it! Yes, you could use an editor, but still, that was superb! Thank you! Can't wait to read more.
I like the description of the male hairless feminine body. I was expecting a masculine hairy body version of the futa to match perfectly. I don't know why people like futa but no malnly body hairs
SO WONDERFUL, PLEASE ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER, IF NOT MORE...BETTY jo xoxo
This is beyond doubt the best story I have read, Just wish I could find a girlfriend with such a huge cock to fuck my tight ass, want to read more stories of this couple and how they get on, mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Please more Taylor and Bianca are so cute together and should get up to all sorts of depraved adventures together!
Incredible story. Would absolutely love it if you continue writing more stories like this.
I'd also really love it if you'd continue this story. Maybe after finding out they are a perfect match sexually, they'd also like to explore how compatible they are emotionally. Maybe they'll go on a first date a week or so after this, and they decide not to meet or masturbate until then and only talk/text on the phone, then when the date night comes they'll either be unable to keep their hands off eachother (which would be really hot, like him blowing her before they go out, them sneaking off to the bathroom in the restaurant to fuck, etc) or they'll show off their willpower to the max and wait until the night is over, actually get to know eachother and have a good time for real, only to explode on eachother when they get home after (which I'd personally prefer).
Again, though, I'd be really happy if you'd just continue writing stories of this kind in the future.
Fantastic! Loved every line of it. It got me hard and leaking precum, thanks!
I couldn't take it but I'd love to play with Taylor as he gets fucked. Maybe a daisy chain or just sucking him.
I love it, please write more. My personal hope is that they could have a nice loving relationship and fun dates without a lot of the abuse that sometimes creeps into these stories.
This is a very hot story, I hope you do decide to write more of your ideas for these two. Your style is great for this, and Taylor is such a sexy character :)
Loved it. Just the Right amount of Seductive Hesitation. A Part 2 would be Nice.
A 11 inch cock - come on - get real! The story would be much better with some realism rather than Barnum and Bailey sized dicks.