All Comments on 'A Match with An Old Friend'

Sexy as hell , hope we get to read the rematch.

Great story. Would love to have more - and longer stories like this!

and just a note on a single word that I saw misspelled 2x... (maybe you can edit the story and fix those) - I cringed every time I saw the misspelled word "feinted", though. Big difference in "feinted" and "fainted".

I didn't read past the second paragraph. Any story that begins by rattling off character body dimensions and descriptors as if they were sports stats is an immediate pass. Most details don't need to be given, and for the ones that do, reveal them naturally through the course of storytelling. Leaving some things to the reader's imagination instead of lazily listing them is so much more interesting and erotic.

Can you finish your "Amy and I Wrestle Another Couple" Story. I would like an ending and the consequence portion.

Love the story how did the rematch go?