All Comments on 'A Matched Set of Boytoys'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very Hot!!

Excellent start in this story of seduction. Very well paced, not over or under descriptive either in my opinion. Certainly got me hard and excited to read the next chapter!!

2275jr2275jrover 13 years ago
BRING YOU PUSSY TO ANOTHERS ATTENTION

brilliant hot horny story reading this was the old guy watching you cumming hard awesome story very exciting to read now for your next very wet cumming.

Many FeathersMany Feathersover 13 years ago
Very erotic start

I will be interested in seeing how you develop the rest of the story. So far...so good. I enjoyed the insight, thought process, and sexual banter back and forth between the characters. Also liked the build up rather than jumping right in as most stories seem to do here.

Again, thank you for a most enjoyable read, and I look forward to reading more from you

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well Done

Please please please -more. You definitely left me wanting more (you left me nicely wet as well.) ;0

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I love to write. To me, the joy is in the chase, the dance, the slow patient seduction. This is all set off so well when one gets the the hard, fast, nasty bits.

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