by Nephylim
Beautiful! Was hooked from the very first sentence. Would love a sequel or something. :) You are truly an amazing writer! I almost cried when I thought that Eden was going to lose Summer for good, and then I did cry when Summer woke up! Hahaha!
That was wonderful! I caught the name from the other site, and man, am I glad you posted this here!
What a beautiful theme: Hope.
~M
That was a very good story and I would love to read more from you:)
it brought tears to my eyes, like others have said. Very beautiful, simple and just what you want at Christmas!
Loyalty, faithfulness and refusing to give up. Powerful, beautiful story.
That was just amazing from start to finish. Beautifully written, and well thought. You have such an eloquence about your writing; elegant and grace that you rarely see anymore. I truly hope you continue writing as I have become an instant fan.
I loved the story. That was very beautiful. The only thing I would have liked would be if you introduced their relationship/history in the beginning b/c it wasn't clear if they were a couple or just friends. Aside from that it was really done perfectly. I enjoyed it alot. A story of hope for the holidays.
I have to agree it was a beautiful story, well written and such devotion if we could only be so lucky!!
Like your story with Luke and Chris, you have a marvelous way of communicating the depth and purity of genuine unconditional love. I was touched and teary at another wonderful telling of love that doesn't give up and always hopes, always believes, always perseveres... love never ends!
Your stories are all so amazing! I have cried at every one of them whether in sadness or joy. Please, please, PLEASE write more!
I don't know where you Devine your material but have witnessed a similar situation occurring with Joan, a woman who worked for me many years ago. I would never expect to read of such a loving situation on this site but your words bring back good memories of Real Life relationships. You have The Power.
I loved it. Beautiful ending! There was a lot of love. Thank you!
Your Friend,
Darryl
That was beautiful. It reminded me of Tom Bridegroom and Shane Crone's love.
What a wonderful story! You are a wonderful writer with such a knack for the impossible, yet believable! Well worth the reading! To the world on here, try it..you'll love it!
Wow. This was a great story. Even though I knew where it was going, it was a lovely delivery.
Bravo
Amazing story full of love and trust, something very rare in these troubled times.