by Drover60
Brilliant story well written and a pleasure to read is any thoughts on continuing it for a couple more stories of this female perhaps her going to model for Pascal
Yuo need to proof read. There are punctuation errors and missing words, but as for the story, BRILLIANT. The build up was exciting and the premis real enough to accept.
More please.
Great story with fantastic build-up. I like that this is just a one-off, too. As much as I want more, this is where the story should end