All Comments on 'A Model Wife'

by Drover60

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hugh58hugh583 months ago

Brilliant story well written and a pleasure to read is any thoughts on continuing it for a couple more stories of this female perhaps her going to model for Pascal

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Yuo need to proof read. There are punctuation errors and missing words, but as for the story, BRILLIANT. The build up was exciting and the premis real enough to accept.

More please.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

An absolutely assinine scenario.

PrivateFirstClassPrivateFirstClass3 months ago

Great story with fantastic build-up. I like that this is just a one-off, too. As much as I want more, this is where the story should end

EmmeluringenEmmeluringen3 months ago

Thank you! This was a very erotic story.

mrBIGbmrBIGbabout 1 month ago

I wonder what she thinks about her husband.

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I am an amateur writer and all I have written is fantasy and for my own pleasure. Literotica means that I can share them with others. If anyone actually likes them, it make posting worthwhile. Story themes are mainly around uniforms and spanking. All characters are over 18.