by Alexandra
Go girl, the thought of another man's come on your lips as he entered your mouth almost made me come!
As for anonymous from Italy, it is clear he meant to be in the Gay category?
great story, had me going. don't know if i'd rather be josh or steve. either would be fine.
love the writing style and rapid pace of the plot. great work alexandra.
Hi Alex,
Telling a story of sex play erotically is a difficult task for most writers but I think you handle this story very well indeed. I was as much a spectator as Josh was and felt somewhat like he did. In other words your efforts at arousing your reader certainly succeeded for me! Well done - I gave you five stars.
Les.
I wonder if it might fester and grow to be something other than a one-time thing. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.