All Comments on 'A Moment's Fantasy'

Shower play is always so much fun. I love that there is that connectivity in the gaze between the lovers. That is so hot.

here is a good story.

I'm not a fan of first person, but it was an interesting read. Hope you enjoyed writing it. I can see the personal fantasy in it and that is a good thing. Congrats on posting your first story.

Very nice. I like first time stories they say alot about the author. Only minor changes (grammar ) are needed. I hope you continue to pen what you feel/felt and know. *Kisses*

I loved it . . especially when he said "cum for me."

Very sexy first time story...you write what you feel/felt with elegance unlike many first timers. I hope you continue to pen many more...loved it and the author has talent!

Very nice and very sensual.

Makes me think I need to move to the East Coast . .

You have written a senual, erotic story that paints a very vivid picture of your characters. Thank you