All Comments on 'A Monster Life Ch. 57-60'

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TJSkywindTJSkywindabout 3 years ago

Wanna bet Dolk is in league with the bad guys?

Thanks for sharing! 5* Slainté

skippersdadskippersdadabout 3 years ago

holy crap to short i need more i need my fix hurry more please , I love your stories and this is one i love.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I fucking love this story man. Even without the oddly wholesome orgy scenes, this is legit a good, fun isekai harem adventure story. Nothing feels forced and everything progresses pretty naturally.

Definitely looking forward to the comeuppance for Elz’s douchey ex. You’ve got a serious fan in me and I’m SO looking forward to more! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This reads like a PBS Saturday morning cartoon, with random sex scenes thrown in to make it more interesting. Bunches of forced cliches, people doing things no logical sane adult would do just to move the plot along. It would have been far more interesting, for instance, if one of the kidnap victims was actually shot by the Dals

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