by SonyaShah
A good, simple story whose effect was not diminished by difficulties with grammar and syntax
Could be a good story, but there are too many fragmented sentences and grammatical errors.
The writing of this story is good. I only wish if she didn’t lock the door and the wife barged in as she squirted all over her husband’s face, that would have been epic.
Good writing!
Holy crap on a cracker, this hot! Hey, if I hire you as a maid, would you do this for me? I tip well...